Autumn
Your hands commit prayers on my body, circumvent
the makeshift halo surrounding my pliant being, yet
your lips abstain from my mouth, instead plant perfect
bruises the color of autumn's twilight along the length
of my collarbone...until I'm a deep river gazed upon by
a slow moving moon, that takes pieces of my soul
and this is the part you kiss as the wind kisses the clouds.
Toi
8/24
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29 comments:
"...bruises the color of autumn's twilight..."
Sublime.
I loved:
"plant perfect
bruises the color of autumn's twilight along the length
of my collarbone...until I'm a deep river gazed upon by
a slow moving moon"
sensual, alive, delicious, provocative...beautiful
(This weeks prompt has yeilded some very beautiful prose and poetry!)
This is deep. Splendid imaging
The World of Lost Souls
Cinderella - Hi. oOo...loving
sublime - extrasuperlative thanks.
kay - hi. i'm humbled by your
sweet words. thanks.
Coraline - hi - Thanks.
Beautiful use of language.
Very creative uses of the words. Strong word imagery.
Angel, thanks so much, I try.
Carina, hey there - thanks for
your comment.
Sensual..
reaching out
Girl, you are good, rather 'Good' would be an understatement.
It has everything, love, desire and what not. You show different hues of love making everytime.
intense !!! loved the imagery here .. and also your blog look :) its really nice
Thanks, GT, I left a comment on
your poem Reaching Out, a couple
of days okay - inspiring post.
BA, so loving on you right now.
Thanks a bunch of black and white
roses, Xo, Toi.
LadyNimue, your words have
thrilled me - Thanks. Your
blog is exquisite.
*bows Down
LOVED every word of this post.
//a deep river gazed upon by a slow moving moon//
Awesome :P
rainboy, oh - you are too good
to me - thanks as bunch of lilies
dewy with rain.
Ah! What can one say.. made of lovely dreams..
Do visit me for a laugh if you wish to have one..Earlier to that is 3ww.
Thanks, Ramesh.
beautifully worded! :)
Ria, hi. Thanks a bunch.
Ria, hi. Thanks a bunch.
Ria, hi. Thanks a bunch.
Beautiful n exquisite as always :)
Its a pleasure reading your posts.
Wow wonderfully woven words!!
Shas, thanks. Appreciate exquisite,
used with my poetry.
Ria, hi and thanks very much.
I came again and re-read this still enchanted by the lovely lines :)
UPDATE PLEASE !!!!!
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