Wednesday, August 25, 2010

3WW.10

Autumn

Your hands commit prayers on my body, circumvent
the makeshift halo surrounding my pliant being, yet
your lips abstain from my mouth, instead plant perfect
bruises the color of autumn's twilight along the length
of my collarbone...until I'm a deep river gazed upon by
a slow moving moon, that takes pieces of my soul
and this is the part you kiss as the wind kisses the clouds.


Toi
8/24


http://threewordwednesday.blogspot.com

29 comments:

Cinderella said...

"...bruises the color of autumn's twilight..."

Sublime.

K said...

I loved:

"plant perfect
bruises the color of autumn's twilight along the length
of my collarbone...until I'm a deep river gazed upon by
a slow moving moon"

sensual, alive, delicious, provocative...beautiful

(This weeks prompt has yeilded some very beautiful prose and poetry!)

Coraline J. Thompson said...

This is deep. Splendid imaging

The World of Lost Souls

Toi said...

Cinderella - Hi. oOo...loving
sublime - extrasuperlative thanks.

Toi said...

kay - hi. i'm humbled by your
sweet words. thanks.

Toi said...

Coraline - hi - Thanks.

Angel said...

Beautiful use of language.

Carina said...

Very creative uses of the words. Strong word imagery.

Toi said...

Angel, thanks so much, I try.

Toi said...

Carina, hey there - thanks for
your comment.

gautami tripathy said...

Sensual..


reaching out

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Girl, you are good, rather 'Good' would be an understatement.

It has everything, love, desire and what not. You show different hues of love making everytime.

ladynimue said...

intense !!! loved the imagery here .. and also your blog look :) its really nice

Toi said...

Thanks, GT, I left a comment on
your poem Reaching Out, a couple
of days okay - inspiring post.

Toi said...

BA, so loving on you right now.
Thanks a bunch of black and white
roses, Xo, Toi.

Toi said...

LadyNimue, your words have
thrilled me - Thanks. Your
blog is exquisite.

rainboy said...

*bows Down

LOVED every word of this post.

//a deep river gazed upon by a slow moving moon//

Awesome :P

Toi said...

rainboy, oh - you are too good
to me - thanks as bunch of lilies
dewy with rain.

Ramesh Sood said...

Ah! What can one say.. made of lovely dreams..

Do visit me for a laugh if you wish to have one..Earlier to that is 3ww.

Toi said...

Thanks, Ramesh.

Ria said...

beautifully worded! :)

Toi said...

Ria, hi. Thanks a bunch.

Toi said...

Ria, hi. Thanks a bunch.

Toi said...

Ria, hi. Thanks a bunch.

Sh@s said...

Beautiful n exquisite as always :)
Its a pleasure reading your posts.

Ria said...

Wow wonderfully woven words!!

Toi said...

Shas, thanks. Appreciate exquisite,
used with my poetry.

Toi said...

Ria, hi and thanks very much.

rainboy said...

I came again and re-read this still enchanted by the lovely lines :)

UPDATE PLEASE !!!!!