Abide In Me
~ My heart jumps into the native air surrounding
us. Your words bait my imagination, betray my
resolve. Rough hands become savior eclipsing all.
Yet I am not a victim, for this is the kind of love
that has haunted my dreams, returning like a
restless needle searching for a place to rest.
Toi
7.21
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22 comments:
Wow. This poem created a rush of very distinct images for me. Two lovers intertwined. A mother and child...
Evocative.
Kay ~ Thanks so much.
Just simply beautiful. The roughness of lovers, this simmers.
Hi Thom. How are you? Thanks so
much for your comments.
let the needle sting, let it pierce, for when it is handled by the lover, pain is ecstasy.
Nice lines, lovable.
Cheers
Blasphemous Aesthete
Whoa, A.S. thanks for such a
provocative response.
Oh, how gorgeous -- sensuous and evocative.
Thanks, Thomma Lyn, very much,
glad you enjoyed this tryst.
"Yet I am not a victim.."
How could I be, when I have loved you more every time I have bled.
Sublime.
Cinderella, I love your phrase,
it fits wonderfully with this
piece - Thank you.
I can imagine the rough passion between two lovers....the girl submitting to the love of her man
keep writing!
Aparna, hi - how are you?
Thanks, for your insight.
The emotions that accompany one when one provides a place to rest n hide for a restless soul is inexplicable but you well defined it.
Thanks, Shas, your words are
soothing to my soul.
Dear Toi, this poem is like a spirit wrapping itself around
my psyche. Wow.
Thanks, Cynthia. This poem was
in my pysche.
Follow Me
Some far love song calls
to me like a small bird calls
from the wire outside
my kitchen window
and me, I must hesitate
before I answer
before I dare you
to follow me down into
the one sweet love back
in the old shadows
of shared memories.
Lovely, Christopher.
Beautiful! Very sensual!
Gerardine
Hi Geraldine, thanks a bunch of
yellow roses for your encouraging
comments.
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