Wednesday, July 21, 2010

3WW. 8

Abide In Me

~ My heart jumps into the native air surrounding
us. Your words bait my imagination, betray my
resolve. Rough hands become savior eclipsing all.
Yet I am not a victim, for this is the kind of love
that has haunted my dreams, returning like a
restless needle searching for a place to rest.



K said...

Wow. This poem created a rush of very distinct images for me. Two lovers intertwined. A mother and child...

Toi said...

Kay ~ Thanks so much.

ThomG said...

Just simply beautiful. The roughness of lovers, this simmers.

Toi said...

Hi Thom. How are you? Thanks so
much for your comments.

Anonymous Someone said...

let the needle sting, let it pierce, for when it is handled by the lover, pain is ecstasy.

Nice lines, lovable.

Blasphemous Aesthete

Toi said...

Whoa, A.S. thanks for such a
provocative response.

Thomma Lyn said...

Oh, how gorgeous -- sensuous and evocative.

Toi said...

Thanks, Thomma Lyn, very much,
glad you enjoyed this tryst.

Cinderella said...

"Yet I am not a victim.."

How could I be, when I have loved you more every time I have bled.


Toi said...

Cinderella, I love your phrase,
it fits wonderfully with this
piece - Thank you.

Aparna said...

I can imagine the rough passion between two lovers....the girl submitting to the love of her man

keep writing!

Toi said...

Aparna, hi - how are you?
Thanks, for your insight.

Shas said...

The emotions that accompany one when one provides a place to rest n hide for a restless soul is inexplicable but you well defined it.

Toi said...

Thanks, Shas, your words are
soothing to my soul.

Cynthia said...

Dear Toi, this poem is like a spirit wrapping itself around
my psyche. Wow.

Toi said...

Thanks, Cynthia. This poem was
in my pysche.

christopher said...

Follow Me

Some far love song calls
to me like a small bird calls
from the wire outside
my kitchen window
and me, I must hesitate
before I answer
before I dare you
to follow me down into
the one sweet love back
in the old shadows
of shared memories.

Toi said...

Lovely, Christopher.

Cinderella said...
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Anonymous said...

Beautiful! Very sensual!

Toi said...

Hi Geraldine, thanks a bunch of
yellow roses for your encouraging

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