IIIW. 1
his betrayal makes me feel non-existent... a thin hum
beneath a strong wind whistling my name...mocks me,
my heart...i have to escape the only way possible...through
my dreams...moist-faced and closed-eyed...night after
senseless, moonless night...i'll throb with memories of
your hands on my face...my mind slipping past the now...
until at last my dream life will become my only reality.
t.
3wordwednesday prompt
13 comments:
Short and sweet...this is very beautiful.
april, hi and thanks.
Very powerful for so few words
peaceful, thanks and peace.
portrayal of the aftermath of a betrayal is as piercing as any sting.
Sometimes, the feelings speak more than words.
Beautifully done
What feeling in this. Thanks for the contribution, and I hope you'll be back.
piercing and it replays in the mind like
a rerun of a B movie, for awhile. thanks Anon.
the words were so intriguing, thanks Thom.
Beneath each word lies pain that pricks the present. Beautifully written.
and shas the pain is present in each line
of my life, i know you understand.
lovely words.. shows the hurt.. and the desire but why wait for this to be reality.. if you are betrayed then i would say move on.. tons of good things to come up yet
I did not mean that you were betrayed or anything just the words :)
se you soon
trying to capture the hurt, the true feelings
that tear one's heart...thanks, Bikramjit.
thanks, Clutch.
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