Saturday, May 8, 2010

betrayal

IIIW. 1


his betrayal makes me feel non-existent... a thin hum
beneath a strong wind whistling my name...mocks me,
my heart...i have to escape the only way possible...through
my dreams...moist-faced and closed-eyed...night after
senseless, moonless night...i'll throb with memories of
your hands on my face...my mind slipping past the now...
until at last my dream life will become my only reality.




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3wordwednesday prompt

14 comments:

April Lindfors said...

Short and sweet...this is very beautiful.

Toi said...

april, hi and thanks.

Peaceful Pandemonium said...

Very powerful for so few words

Toi said...

peaceful, thanks and peace.

Anonymous Someone said...

portrayal of the aftermath of a betrayal is as piercing as any sting.

Sometimes, the feelings speak more than words.

Beautifully done

ThomG said...

What feeling in this. Thanks for the contribution, and I hope you'll be back.

Toi said...

piercing and it replays in the mind like
a rerun of a B movie, for awhile. thanks Anon.

Toi said...

the words were so intriguing, thanks Thom.

Shas said...

Beneath each word lies pain that pricks the present. Beautifully written.

Toi said...

and shas the pain is present in each line
of my life, i know you understand.

Bikramjit said...

lovely words.. shows the hurt.. and the desire but why wait for this to be reality.. if you are betrayed then i would say move on.. tons of good things to come up yet

I did not mean that you were betrayed or anything just the words :)

se you soon

CLUTCH said...

awesome

Toi said...

trying to capture the hurt, the true feelings
that tear one's heart...thanks, Bikramjit.

Toi said...

thanks, Clutch.