Beautiful.Is it a submission triggered by need or want?
Why do I find a pang of being cheated and left alone in your poems? Going through your recent poems gave me this impression. Correct me if I am wrong. You express little emotions with intricate details.RegardsBlasphemous
Beautiful snippet of desire shared...love it!
fresh and sensuous...I like this!!
lovely poem of connection~
shas, hi...both: want and need. want if youenjoy the act of submitting feeling helpless...or/and need if you're inner being needs tobe submissive - is made to feel valid bysubmitting.
hi ASB, um...I'm a melancholy poet, sometimes.
brenda, hi - thanks, you're so sweet....sandra, hi - thanks, for the kind words....there is an element of connection here,tammi, thanks for seeing that.
A romantic, beautiful, and heartfelt poem. Beautifully written.
very sensuos melancholic take.. romantic too!
what a beautiful poem Toi, sensous as Leo said!
Lovely, very well written.
such beautiful words for my poem, w.girl, thanks....i am that, tumblewords, thanks....thanks, leo for your sweet comment.
didn't notice the sensual aspect, thanks, A....thanks, short poems.
This is lovely and when one can find such a tender, caring treasure, one must hold it closely and secure it forever. Beautiful.
Nothing can compare, to find oneself cherished.And you are so right, Rebecca, one must holdthis love close and secure.
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