Why do I find a pang of being cheated and left alone in your poems? Going through your recent poems gave me this impression. Correct me if I am wrong. You express little emotions with intricate details.
shas, hi...both: want and need. want if you enjoy the act of submitting feeling helpless... or/and need if you're inner being needs to be submissive - is made to feel valid by submitting.
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Beautiful.
Is it a submission triggered by need or want?
Why do I find a pang of being cheated and left alone in your poems? Going through your recent poems gave me this impression. Correct me if I am wrong. You express little emotions with intricate details.
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Blasphemous
Beautiful snippet of desire shared...love it!
fresh and sensuous...I like this!!
lovely poem of connection~
shas, hi...both: want and need. want if you
enjoy the act of submitting feeling helpless...
or/and need if you're inner being needs to
be submissive - is made to feel valid by
submitting.
hi ASB, um...I'm a melancholy poet, sometimes.
brenda, hi - thanks, you're so sweet.
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sandra, hi - thanks, for the kind words.
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there is an element of connection here,
tammi, thanks for seeing that.
A romantic, beautiful, and heartfelt poem. Beautifully written.
Melancholy works...:)
very sensuos melancholic take.. romantic too!
what a beautiful poem Toi, sensous as Leo said!
Lovely, very well written.
such beautiful words for my poem, w.girl, thanks.
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i am that, tumblewords, thanks.
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thanks, leo for your sweet comment.
didn't notice the sensual aspect, thanks, A.
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thanks, short poems.
This is lovely and when one can find such a tender, caring treasure, one must hold it closely and secure it forever. Beautiful.
Nothing can compare, to find oneself cherished.
And you are so right, Rebecca, one must hold
this love close and secure.
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